j'a une rédaction en anglais sur un meurtre pouvez vous me corriger si il y a des fautes ou si c'est mal dit je peut vous donner l'écrit en français si vous le
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j'a une rédaction en anglais sur un meurtre pouvez vous me corriger si il y a des fautes ou si c'est mal dit je peut vous donner l'écrit en français si vous le souhaite merci :)
ce qu'il faut faire: A murder commited by a criminal choosing a victim, taking precautions, commiting the murder Write your story using the past tense/ beware of active/passive. And use of pronoms
j'ai du mal du coup merci pour votre aide :)
My name is Marc, since my childhood, I look for thirst of vengeance since the disappearance of my mother, then of my 5-year-old younger sister died under my eyes for this day I look for a girl looking like my sister and my mother. On this January 1st, 2015 in the street going out of a grocer's shop I saw them this girl about 6 years, I followed them to at her home time arrived I looked at them during 1 week and every day I looked at the schedules of absence of her parents and the routes of the girl. On Monday, January 1st I saw them going out of the school to go back home I skipped behind her I taken, put in trunk of the car stick from head to foot with a headband stuck in the mouth
ce qu'il faut faire: A murder commited by a criminal choosing a victim, taking precautions, commiting the murder Write your story using the past tense/ beware of active/passive. And use of pronoms
j'ai du mal du coup merci pour votre aide :)
My name is Marc, since my childhood, I look for thirst of vengeance since the disappearance of my mother, then of my 5-year-old younger sister died under my eyes for this day I look for a girl looking like my sister and my mother. On this January 1st, 2015 in the street going out of a grocer's shop I saw them this girl about 6 years, I followed them to at her home time arrived I looked at them during 1 week and every day I looked at the schedules of absence of her parents and the routes of the girl. On Monday, January 1st I saw them going out of the school to go back home I skipped behind her I taken, put in trunk of the car stick from head to foot with a headband stuck in the mouth
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1. Réponse alexrodriguez
Y'a des fautes ^^ tu peux me passer le français ste plait? -
2. Réponse Mariamkesso
My name is Marc, since my childhood, I am thirsty of vengeance since my mother's disappearance, my youngest sister of 5 years died under my eyes since this day I look for a girl who looks like my sister and my mother. This January 1st, 2015 in the street while taking a grocer's store I saw them roughly this girl of 6 years, I followed them until has their house I looked at them during 1 week and every day I looked at the programs of absence of his/her/its parents and the girl's itineraries. Monday, January 1st I saw them coming back of the school, I jumped behind her, I put it in the car, I glued his/her/its mouth with a headband